our first draft of the story line

for a while we have been thinking about what the narrative would be for our music video, after brainstorming some initial ideas and casting the roles we now have a solid story line that we can translate to a story board.

Its starts off with a young girl who is 17 years old, who is lonely and sitting on an abandoned carriage on a train apart from a young man dressed all in black who is watching over her protectively from a couple of rows behind. Her make up has run down her face to show she has been crying. She has a bag full of her clothes which she clutches tightly to. She closes her eyes and leans back slightly. as her eyes open, we are then taken to a flashback of her as a little girl.

The little girl is then shown lying down on her parents bed. She sits upright looks around and notices her mothers dresser. she sits down looks into the mirror and then proceeds to slather her face in her mothers make up. slowly then she opens the drawer and finds a bottle of pills, prescribed to her mother, holding them up to the light looking confused, she opens the bottle and swallows a few. her mother then appears at the door looking tired, noticing the girl, she comes in and smiles at her make up covered face giving her a hug, then she notices the opened bottle of pills lying on her bed. she becomes erratic tearing the room about searching for it. The girl sits there awkwardly among all this chaos, with her head down. the next shot we see is her leaving at the crack of dawn weighed down with bags.

by the end of this scene as we watch her running her away on the line, ' when will you realize vienna waits for you' this is at the end of the first chorus, showing she has gotten in too deep and is running away to find something better.